Talk:Fan: The Honeyhall Horror/@comment-25076398-20140707031338

You told me to do a review on this... How? This is so very long. But I'll try. I'll say seven out of ten. The writing was good. The dialouge didn't really seem like the characters at times but I suppose that's to be expected. I like the reference to "new email" in the beginning. Really, what took me out the most were the typos. Now that I've reviewed this, will you please say what you like about my fan fiction, Jimmy Casket's Secret?