Talk:Fan: The Honeyhall Horror/@comment-24238747-20140707162240

Deleted Scene, intended to be in the chapter The Truth of Honeyhall:

..."The rest of the story is boring. I found the town Johnny was in, we found each other, and so on. But weird things happened. When I turned of age, twenty-six, I stopped. Growing. Aging. I still am twenty-six." Toast whistled. "That's so...odd. Isn't it, sir?" he asked, looking over at Ghost. Ghost was sweating, and he looked like he was fighting back a laugh. Toast gasped, going over to him. He grabbed Ghost's shoulders, looking him in the eyes. "No, no, not again. Listen...You can do it...listen...Don't let him get in....Don't let him c-control you...You can fight it...." he was saying. Gregory was examining what they were doing. Ghost closed his eyes, tears dribbling out of the corner of his eyes. Ghost started to sputter. "He... w-wants to k-know.....wants y-you to know...h-is sec...his...his," he was saying, face reddening. Toast looked like he was going to cry, "Don't give in...It's ok...it'll pass, sir. It's g-going to pass...." Ghost's chest rising started to cease, his face started to relax. Toast wiped the sweat off Ghost's face. Ghost looked up. "I did it...I didn't let him...get to me," he said. Toast smiled. "I knew you could do it, sir," he said. They turned to look at Gregory, looking petrified. "What...happened?" he said. Ghost looked down, and Toast cleared his throat. "He...nothing, he's fine now." Ghost looked up. "Anyway...as I was saying..."

It was removed because (A) The chapter was already long. (B) I wasn't sure...Does Toast KNOW he has Jimmy inside him? Or not? I wanted to leave it up to you guys.