Talk:Fan: Paridise falls (a fallout tale)/@comment-JoshFenwick-20140805074130/@comment-JoshFenwick-20140818195037

I'm sorry. You should at least get a proper explanation as to why I don't like it. Besides the typos and formatting problems, two words: Character. Consistency. The Cywren we all know doesn't seem like a swearing type of person. She's meek. And in this, she swears like a sailor