Talk:Fan: Billy and Sally's past/@comment-24238747-20150302183924

Hello. Nice job! :) Few things to improve!

I'll put 'Fan:' in front of this since this techincally counts as FanFiction, so next time you wanna do something like this I'd appreciate it if you'd put Fan: In front of it too ;)

Also, try to work on the spelling and grammar, but I know people sometimes struggle with it. Try to put spaces between the writing, because here this is known as a 'wall' of text, which is harder to the eyes and harder to read.

In other words, very nice job!