Board Thread:Special Projects Division/@comment-25867149-20170323101408/@comment-28885584-20170407042454

Thanks, but I don't fit particularly well in other's shoes. I'll give the storyline a try though.

How exactly are we doing this?

My attempts

1. In medias res happens title sequence flashback 1 (Samantha) flashback 2 (other guy w/ flashback) Rookies arrive Gavin Pretends to be Jhonny rookies are sent to investigate stuff. Leah figures out Gavin's infiltration wolf guy w/ flashback defeats the ghost It's a training exercise Leah follows 'Johnny' Gavin exposed Samantha attacks they win and get promoted credits ????

2. In medias res happens title sequence Rookies arrive Gavin Pretends to be Jhonny rookies are sent to investigate stuff. Leah figures out Gavin's infiltration wolf guy w/ flashback defeats the ghost It's a training exercise Leah follows 'Johnny' Gavin exposed Samantha attacks they win and get promoted credits whichever flashback

3. flashback 1 (Samantha) flashback 2 (other guy w/ flashback) title sequence Rookies arrive Gavin Pretends to be Jhonny rookies are sent to investigate stuff. Leah figures out Gavin's infiltration wolf guy w/ flashback defeats the ghost It's a training exercise Leah follows 'Johnny' Gavin exposed Samantha attacks they win and get promoted credits ???

so, for #2, it may be cool to have every after credits sequence a flashback of one of the characters, whether serious, comical, or plot-developing.

Ignoring that for a moment, however, this is an abbreviation of the plot as discussed earlier, we need to focus on how and who says what and why. whose character's are whose? how does your character fit in, around, or on the final picture? are there going to be easter eggs, what will later be central to the plot that we will apply to the background. we talked about a hotel with ghostly customers, where will that be located. do you guys have any specific things you want in this video?

In medias res Ideas/questions final boss fight- who will narrate? end of the pilot- again who will narrate? what part?

My proposal: a few meet at the train station. later, after everyone arrives, the station manager counts the roster(roll call) they go through the train equivalent of airplane security. they go through another roll call He leads them to their private train there they get on the train another roll call later, (chatting can occur here) they arrive by train Some don't even notice at first. they notice when the bell rings. (the bell is a horrible sounding cross between a school bell and a gong) they all look out the window (and see the base) Then Gavin attracts their attention and welcomes them At least one hand is raised when called on, it is Cat: he got on the wrong train somehow. Gavin allows the rookies to go on in while he deals with Cat all the rookies go in the front door; some run in, some walk, that one guy just, like, scowls his way in.