Talk:Fan: Johnny Ghost and the House Keepers Wife/@comment-Vamonkey-20140731070742

Could you please credit Sylargrimm for the cover? The Wiki already has a bit of a bad reputation when it comes to crediting artists.

Other than that, this is a really great fanfic. Just try pressing that little "enter" button a bit less. For example, the first few lines of chapter one should be one paragraph until you feel like the sentences are talking about a different topic. It should be:

"Johnny Toast was sleeping, just last night Toast and Ghost had an all night macaroni party. He had macaroni all over his uniform as well with bottles of whiskey everywhere. Ghost had just woken up by a ringing sound coming from the living room of their apartment."

Also, try making the sentences "flow" a bit better. What I would do is add some more details to smooth it out. Anyways, keep on writing. I can't wait for chapter 3!