Talk:Fan: Casket: Jimmy Casket's Origin/@comment-207.172.58.54-20140625031803

If I had to rate this, I'd give it a 2 out of 10. The plot was generic and it wasn't scary and the "do you wanna know my secret" phrase wasn't explained Well. There were slot of parts where the story lost track of itself and it gave slot of information that was irrelevant, and also left some things to be explained, it was sloppy and needed to be worked on much more, also it keept switching from first person and third person point of view which I found very annoying when reading the story and it ruined the flow of the reading