Thread:Justjackbros/@comment-25076398-20140729041219/@comment-24238747-20140731124731

Well, I do really like it. Good characters, good storyline. Hardly any typos. But I feel like it's a bit confusing at times. Oh yeah, OH now he's knocked out, and now they're friends AHH! Who's this guy? Ok we're back. No, knocked out!

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