FAN: THE SHADOW OF THE ACACHALLA'S

chapter one (escape)
"Memories..." Said one who had lived and lurked under the floors of the seven eleven. Who had stared into the soles of visitors with eyes like a dying sun. Who ad grown tedious after months of loneliness and pain."sweet,painful, soul burning MIND BLOWING,HEART BREAKING,SPINE SNAPPINGNLY beautiful memories! But I grow bored of those." The figure spoke to his surroundings like a teacher lecturing a student. But in the darkness the madman heard a thousand whispers from the darkness as a rebuttal."yes,YES Acachalla would certainly break such a boredom, as I would break his well...EVERYTHING!" The dark one chuckled at the daydreams of himself tearing papa Acachalla limb from limb and feasting on what remained." And by each passing moment in the darkness I have grown ever stronger,certainly more than my fat,bald and ugly brother." The shadows continued to feed this ones demented dreams of murder,destruction and chaos." Ah yes, and once I would be done with him then certainly the world would remember me and glorious things I have done for it." The shadow man arose a continued to rant his head off, warping his mind ever further. "And what is to stop me? This elevator that isn't even out of order? No,no I think I shall take my leave, show the world my full potential. To show them one man could end anything and everything. To show everyone that Jeremy Acachalla is back in business!" The deranged shadow we could now only call Jeremy tackled the rusty elevator door again and again,bending and twisting it to near destruction. "AND BUSINESS" 'boom' "IS" 'Boom' "BOOMING!" 'BOOOM'

chapter two(the ultimate freedom)
"One extra large sugar packed slushy with a cheese stuffed deep fried jalapeño cheddar sausage coming right right up ms... "Sally Betty Jessica." Business in papa Acachalla's seven eleven very unlike usual is packed. "Wow" papa Acachalla murmured to his family/employees."we don't even have any gas and we have so many costumers. Guess I just have the silver tongue I if ya know what I'm sayin." "That, or its because you have been holding these people hostage all day." Replied  Gertrude. Briefly followed by officer moloney shouting at the top of his lungs through his microphone "common man just let the hostages go already, I'm tired and hungry could we just call it a day?!" " not until you and your Feds give me my ten thousand anchors of fuel!" "I'm not even sure that a real measurement!" "YOUR not a real measurement!" The argument between the two men escalated as the Acachalla family and the hostages waited for this nonsense to resolve. But as the adults were distracted, billy and Sally noticed a distant noise from the elevator shaft, starting with three bangs then followed by a constant scratching of the walls. "Uh,papa.." Billy tried to inform his father of the occurrence in vain "not now billy I think I can haggle this sucker into getting me a free limo."the noise became louder,nay closer "But papa its really..." "BILLY shush your mouth hole!" The scratching ceased only to be replaced with sounds similar to foot steps. "PAPA" Sally finally intervened,and her voice too high and whiny for her father to ignore. Dang it you two what is it that is so impor...BANG BANG! Papa Acachalla pondered at the familiar sound, like the crunching of a dozen rusty springs followed by a shallow scream. " but, but that's impossible. It can't be..BANG BANG! This time the the door of the elevator was clearly damaged it didn't look like it would take much more. Papa Acachalla took aim with his gun pointed towards the elevator preparing for what was to come. The last crunch came, but not from the elevator... But from the ceiling! And down came Jeremy as he fell both gracefully and fearsomely like a fallen angel. As he fell darkness engulfed the once very light room making sight near to impossible. "What is this,what are you?" One hostages spoke with fear in his soul,and such words he should have never have spoken. "What am I ... " said the crooked one as he grab the poor fool by the neck and lifted him in the air. " I...am the SAVIOR!" Enemy shouted in pride and fury as he tore the mans stomach open and devoured his innards. The people of the seven eleven both disturbed and amazed by the creatures savagery and elegance with words. "Gah,taste like old hot dog. But it sufficed. Now would any of you kind people tell me the location of my brot-BANG Jeremy's head was basted to near smithereens by Acachalla's quick aim. "Common guys we gots to go" papa Acachalla ordered his family to make haste "but papa isn't he, ya know dead?" " not even close" the seeming dead shadow sprung into action yet again near complete to regeneration. The Acachalla family left with all haste possible, but not before locking the hostages in the store, much to their aguish. "Ah so you finally give up do ya? Maloney smirked a papa Acachalla only to be confused that he runs past him "hey where are you guys going?" Maloney protested to the Acachalla's escape, only for his thoughts to be interrupted by the screaming in the seven eleven. Nervously pointing the gun at the figure coming towards him. "Are, are you a hostage?" Asked Maloney fearing for the worst in what stood before him. "hostage? No a prisoner more like,sentenced for crimes I never committed, punished for the sin of others. But now the ultimate freedom Is nigh." Maloney was not one to listen to such nonsense and attempted to arrests the monster in front of him. "Put your hands in the air!" Demanded Maloney and after a Short pause surprisingly did such and chuckled "As you wish but what of him?" "Who?" "Why your shadow." And shocking to Maloney's eyes his own shadow in a sense became Jeremy himself and snapped his neck. And as this happened yet more and more Jeremy clones came and store in the horizon to find Acachalla and his family high tailing it n a car. "Ha ha ha, yes the ultimate freedom s ear indeed.