Thread:Lord Of The Rings-Fan Girl/@comment-24149196-20140603152426/@comment-24149196-20141126233450

Theglem4 wrote: Okay, my teacher read it over and told me what to fix. I fixed what I could, but I still need a new last sentence to the intro and... a new conclusion. Yes, the entire conclusion! Oh, and I still need a quote from the book in each paragraph. Would it be moral to ask you for help? I'm done. I made it work.