Talk:Fan: The Honeyhall Horror/@comment-25076398-20140707031338/@comment-24238747-20140707160522

I will...

But the thing is, I made it long so it would be more like a novel, not just a one page FanFiction. Now that  I Look it at, it's pretty long. Perhaps in the future, I'll refrain from the lenghty stories. And I don't really see any outstanding typos, but I did when I copied it on Microsoft Word. Oh well. Thanks!