Talk:Fan: a level 16 part 1- space adventures/@comment-27465553-20180110012903

Positives: May be inspiried by one of my stories (especially my old ones). Is very Venturiantale-esque.

Negatives: Elusive plot, incorrect grammar, spelling, punctuation (and that "big" pun that made no sense), incoherent writing, and (what I hate the most) super short chapters. But don't worry, you WILL improve. My writing was once kinda crap too, until I practiced my writing skills. If you want to see some great fanfictions, find a few stories by former Venturiantale wiki admin, JustJackBros, or read my Business Unusual (theforest04 version) Part 1 REMASTERED on the Venturiantale fandom wiki.