Talk:Fanfic: Venturians Five Nights At Freddy's/@comment-97.92.227.229-20150104192500

My honest opinion: It needs a little more... story to it. It doesn't have that length that most people look for. It doesn't give me much entertainment, either. Overall, it can be improved if you would put a little more work into it. Please don't take this badly or in any way a professional criticism. I, personally, am a beginner at writing.