Talk:Fan: Host with the Most: The Challenge/@comment-27465553-20180214021731

Hello, I am theforest04, I write stories for Venturiantale on the fandom wiki. Here's what I think of your story. Positives -Great spelling. -Lucid storyline. -Starbucks quote was goddamn awesome. Negatives -A little grammar issues here and there -Cliché new OC comes to town plot -Chapters are way too short