Talk:Fan: Not Clear!! A Venturiantale Fanfiction by Casey/@comment-68.132.104.242-20151214001215/@comment-ElectricFire 169-20151214133747

XD I was joking, I was just pointing out the irony of removing spoilers from a comment located directly under the text which it's supposed to be "spoiling" for. Great story though! :D

Anyway (SPOILER ALERT) I enjoyed the story a lot but I was a bit disappointed that it had a "Bolivian Army" ending - e.g. everybody dies. It was very well written and overall enjoyable, but I still don't get most of it and the formatting could do with some improvement (I think I can help with that one, there are spaces in front of some of the lines which causes the scroll-boxes to appear). All that aside, it's a thrilling story, truly riveting, and I loved every last bit of it. :)