Talk:Fan: "Secrets" Jimmy Casket Origin/@comment-H'jar the Assassin-20140328020101

I know people are really noticing my lack of detail in this fan fiction, the thing is, this is my first fan fiction and I didn't actually care about the detail. Now I have made a new fan fiction, The Dragonborn's Beginnings and I put a lot more detail in it than I did on this one.