Thread:Justjackbros/@comment-26348924-20150427092933/@comment-26348924-20150508014212

Justjackbros wrote: And great chapter! I loved it!! Our writing fits together perfectly.

The only con is things happen a bit too fast. Detail is key. You wanna explain things a lot before, during, and after something big happens. Oh yeah, Myst, can I remove all the extra spaces between sentences? I know it's proper to do that after somebody speaks, but that's not really required in FanFiction. Totally fine you'd rather keep em. Yeah... I rush things too much sometimes. I'll try to fix that next time.

And about the spaces... I was used to that, kinda like a tradition of mine, but if you want to take them off, sure thing.