Thread:TheLoneClone/@comment-25867149-20150924130000/@comment-27182540-20151103211152

Here's the first scene from my first draft of episode two. I know its early, but I just couldn't wait to get started!

SCENE 1: Tatooine – Desert Dunes

The screen flashes with a view of space, stars filling the sky. After a few moments of panning, the camera stops on a desert planet: Tatooine. The screen then cuts to a close-up view of several stormtroopers marching through the sand dunes, rifles held in their hands.

STORMTROOPER 1: This is a waste of time—no rebels are gonna be stupid enough to come to some desert wasteland like Tatooine!

STORMTROOPER LEADER: Just keep looking, unless you want Lord Vader to Force choke you to death like all of the other Imperials that have failed him.

STORMTROOPER 2: (shakes) Don’t say that, Commander. I don’t wanna even picture it!

The other stormtroopers laugh, but they are cut short when a loud roaring sounds above.

STORMTROOPER 2: What is that?

STORMTROOPER LEADER: I dunno…but it doesn’t sound good.

STORMTROOPER 1: Incoming fighters, left flank!

Sure enough, multiple vessels are soaring in the sky above the troopers. But, unlike they had been believed to be, these fighters were not rebel ships: they were…something else.

STORMTROOPER 1: What faction owns those ships, Commander?

STORMTROOPER LEADER: (shakes head): I don’t know…

One of the fighters slows its soaring above the three stormtroopers, and a voice sounds from inside of it.

VOICE OVER LOUDSPEAKER: This is Captain Maloney, off the USS Who’s Your Mama 2. Don’t do anything stupid…or then we’ll know you’re stupid.

The three troopers look to one another, then back up to the fighters.

STORMTROOPER LEADER: We don’t listen to random ships telling us what to do!

Suddenly, a loud buzzing sounds, and then a laser fires, incinerating a section of the ground before the troopers. They all jump back.

MALONEY: Do I make myself clear?

The troopers all nod.

STORMTROOPER LEADER: Fine…but I’m warning you: you don’t want to start trouble with the Galactic Empire, scumbags!

As the three troopers dart across the dunes, the camera zooms out, and the STARBUGGERS: FROM THE LOGS OF CAPTAIN MALONEY pop up on the screen in a fade.

MALONEY: (voiceover) Captain’s log. Stardate: 2350. Recently, me and my crew have established a foothold in the galaxy by wiping out the Dalek fleet above their planet Skaro. However, our mission is far from done. With my crewmates of the USS Who’s Your Mama 2, we will stop at nothing until we return the galaxy to a forever peace…or there’s a special discount at Burger King.